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托福写作高分段落与解析——环境类

时间:2019-03-04 11:48来源:朗阁小编作者:kid

  1. What is the most useful action for people to help protect the environment?

  - Travel by bike or walk to destination

  - Reuse and recycle waste materials

  - Purchase local organic food

  译文:

  这并不是说我们应该完全忽视骑自行车或步行到目的地,以及回收再利用废物的好处。例如,人们将被迫减少使用燃料,环境将干净整洁。然而,由于放弃了驾驶权,人们在路上花的时间将大幅增加,并且通过回收旧材料,人们还必须作出更多的努力。相比之下,通过选择当地有机食品,顾客只需在当地超市做出不同的选择,这不会带来什么麻烦。此外,由于运输时间的缩短,产品会更新鲜,味道更好,这对客户来说是额外的好处。

  优秀范例:

  It is not to say we should completely ignore the benefits of travelling by bike or walk to destination and reusing and recycling waste materials. For example, people will be forced to reduce the use of fuels, and the environment will be clean and tidy. However, by giving up their right to drive, the public will experience a severe increment in their time spent on the road and by recycling used materials, the public also has to make additional efforts. In contrast, by opting for local organic food, the customers simply have to make a different choice at the local supermarkets, which brings little trouble. In addition, due to the reduce time of transportation, the products will be fresher and thus taste better, which is an additional benefit for the customers.

  句式与词汇积累:

  1) be forced to 被迫……

  2) experience a severe increment in their time 用时增加

  3) brings little trouble 不会带来麻烦

  4) make additional efforts 做出额外的努力

  5) an additional benefit 额外的好处

  2. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

  译文:

  我相信这样的一个改变很重要,因为一个人的生存环境可以极大的影响自身的身体和心理健康。糟糕的空气状况会导致很多健康问题,例如:哮喘,并且不正确的垃圾处理方法可能会传播对健康有危害的细菌。另外,环境可以极大的影响一个人的内在感受。在干净有吸引力的环境下,我们时常会感觉比较积极乐观。基于以上理由,我认为我家乡的乡亲们应当团结一致地把我们的家乡建立成为一个更加整洁的地方。

  优秀范例:

  I believe that such a change is important because a person’s living environment can greatly affect both his physical and mental health. Bad air quality can result in many health problems such as asthma, and improperly discarded garbage can spread bacteria that are dangerous to health. In addition, the environment can greatly affect the way a person feels. When in clean, attractive surroundings we always feel more optimistic. For these reasons, I think the people of my hometown should work together to make it a cleaner place to live.

  句式与词汇积累:

  1) greatly affect both his physical and mental health 极大的影响自身的身体和心理健康

  2) result in 导致

  3) asthma 哮喘

  4) improperly discarded garbage 不正确的垃圾处理方式

  5) affect the way a person feels 影响一个人的内在感受

  6) feel more optimistic 感觉更加积极向上

  7) for these reasons 基于这些理由

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