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雅思口语第三部分(Part 3)一直是大多数中国考生比较头疼的部分,其中的原因是Part 3的问题比较有深度,并且没有固定的出题法则。但还是有一些域是Part 3常考的,movie即是一个常考的域。下面我们来看看一个考生的Part 3模拟对答答案及点评。
1. How do you think the Internet will change entertainment in the future? Answer: Just yesterday I saw there's some advertising on Internet to put some blanks on Mr. Bush to attack his economic policies which bring American economy. Comment: 大多数考生回答此题时都只关注题目中的“internet”部分,而往往忽略了关键词“change”, “entertainment”和“future”。而且在此处的“blanks”建议改成“blame”。同时上文答案采用的均为一般现在时,建议将“bring”改成“is bringing”或“has brought”。
2. How do you think the Internet will change ENTERTAINMENT? Answer: It's a kind of entertainment, but it can affect people's opinions... Comment: 考生们往往在遇到此类问题时,容易出现上文的“概括性”答案,缺少好的“支持性”答案。“It’s a kind of entertainment.”这样的表达过于简单,只能获得4-5分。取而代之的,考生们可以采取类似“I believe that, for many people, political discussions are a kind of entertainment, which will probably grow more common in the future"的答案。这样的答案容易将考官带回原话题,可以取得6分以上的成绩。
3. How about in the future? Answer: I think this trend will go on. Comment: 考生们随后应该列举出什么样的trend以及这个trend会go on的原因。
4. Which trend? Answer: People express their ideas through some entertainment. But new patterns on Internet. Comment: 后半句话不是一个完整的句子,缺少动词。同样的,考生也可以给出多的细节来支持自己的观点。例如:"There are new patterns of communication thanks to the Internet, for example..."
5. Can you give me some details on how it will be done in the future? Answer: Because the Internet is comparatively... very cheap ...so people can future some films some, record some we do, record some new music or to put them on the Internet for other people to share, can share their information. Comment: 该学生在回答此题时尝试给出了一些自己的观点,但观点仍然过于简单,并且出现了一些无法读懂的句子,例如:"People can future some films some", 此句可以改为:"People in the future will be able to choose from among many different films". "Record some we do"同样没有任何意思,但之后学生改了自己的答案,因此能改善一下分数。
6. Do you think that this will affect traditional movie theaters? Answer: To some degree because to live to film is more expensive than if you compared with Internet entertainment. Comment: 此答案过于简单,获得雅思口语6分的可能性非常低。此处的"to live to film"也无法理解是什么意思。如果考生能给出些详细的举例或例子,如电影院的价格等等,答案将会清晰。
7. So what will happen to traditional movie theaters in the future? Answer: They should make it more accessible and not maybe from big cities to some smaller cities because especially in China there aren't many films cinemas in small cities in China but Internet we can use Internet whenever, wherever we are. Comment: 这是相对来说比较好的答案,如果考生能在这系列问题的一开始就给出该水平的答案,取得雅思口语6分就相对比较有障了。
8. How can movie theaters become more accessible? Answer: Maybe we don't need large scale cinemas in small cities, but more small more compact uh pattern. Comment: 这又是个过于简单的答案,考生又错失了一个取得的机会。可以尝试使用类似这样的答案:"Maybe we don't need large scale cinemas in small cities where there are fewer people. Instead, more compact theaters might be appropriate". 通过将原来答案中的部分单词进行升华,学生可以展示出自己强的口语表达能力。
9. How do you think you would have enjoyed living 100 years ago, without the Internet and without television or radio? Answer: Maybe life is boring but we still have other styles of more natural entertainment. Can you give me some examples? Answer: Such as play some game, cards, personal contact, personal interchanges, personal communications is more uh, it's more widely used. Comment: 在次的答题中学生就应该给出例子作答,直接给出如下答案:"One example would be playing games such as cards. These are very popular, yet simple to do over the Internet".
10. How do you think television affects society? Answer: I think different people get different information from television. Some people, especially child, children, they vulnerable, they are vulnerable to the television information, information from the television. They can't distinguish what is right, what's wrong, so they may adapt all what they see. Comment: 在这个答案中虽然存在一些小的语法问题,但考生已经在做出比较成功的交流了。
11. So, do you think we should control television in some way? Answer: Maybe, especially like what we have done this days before 10 o'clock we have some contraints in the conTENT of the television but after that more free styles can be show. Comment: 许多英文单词的重音会改变单词的意思,考生们应该非常小心。像这道题中的content:"conTENT" means "happy" while "CONtent" means what is inside.
Thank you, that's the end of the speaking test. Comment:关于这位考生针对这类问题的一个总体评价:考生只在 后给出了一些比较好的句型表达及答案。如果只看 后几个问题的答案,考生能取得6分左右的口语成绩。然而,纵观全部答题,考生或许就只能取得5分左右的成绩了。所以朗阁海外考试研究中心的建议考生在考试前加强对Part 3问题的熟悉度,并利用课余时间收集ideas以好的应对Part 3部分中较难的问题。
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