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小作文：Table 大作文：Young people do not spend their holiday and weekend doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in the natural environment. Why? How to encourage them to go out? 朗阁名师王梦淇点评 1.本次考试难度不大。 2.整体分析： Task 1：动态，表格，Percentages of labor force in various countries who were unemployed in 1994 and 2004. (unemployment rate in nine countries) 参考句型：(注意时态由图片时间决定) 1.... rank first with 数据，followed by … 2....rise steadily from …to …before declining sharply to … 3.There be a dramatic growing trend in …from… to … 4....reach a record high of …in … 5....show a different pattern with a growth in …from …to… 6.Next come …, which increased from…to… Task 2社会生活类话题，难度不大。 题目翻译：许多年轻人在假期和周末不会去户外活动，像自然环境下的远足和爬山这类活动。为什么?如何鼓励他们出去? 分析点评：今天的雅思写作task2，属于雅思写作常考话题，可见一直关注年轻人生活状态。注意考题中关键词：年轻人、室外、自然环境。 从话题上来说，今天的作文题属于生活类话题，对于考生来说不难想出观点。 从题型上来说，不同于观点讨论题，需要按照考题要求回答两个问题。推荐作文做到观点在段落上有明显体现。 从结构上来说，可以采取五段式的写法： 第一段：话题背景+个人观点(主要两个原因) 第二段：(原因一)论述客观原因：人口增多，城市变大，绿地建房，没有户外绿地等适合年轻人活动的场所。 第三段：(原因二)论述主观原因：生活节奏飞快，年轻人忙于工作，即使休息也会选择室内娱乐，不去自然环境活动。 第四段：(鼓励办法)论述方法：增加更多城市绿地等适合年轻人活动的地方，宣传户外活动的重要性。 第五段：总结段，总结个人观点。 主体段1：人口增多，城市变大，没有户外绿地等适合年轻人活动的场所。(Due to an increasing number of the population, many cities are becoming bigger and bigger. Some school children have been raised in homes with less green land around. In fact, a large proportion of Green space available to the population is on the outskirts – in those mountains. Therefore, it is impossible for young people to do outdoor activities in their leisure time as a result of little recreational green space around.) 主体段2：生活节奏飞快，年轻人忙于工作。即使休息也会选择室内娱乐，而不去自然环境活动。(In a fast-paced and high-pressured society, the young tend to be too bound up in their work. They are content with up-to-date in-room entertainment facilities even at rest, instead of getting close to nature, such as hiking and climbing 主体段3：Administrations should change priority in their green space policy. The urban green space is regarded as an effective way to improve urbanite’s physically and mentally healthy level. Past studies have shown that exposure to green space reduces stress, boosts health and makes people less vulnerable to depression. Moreover, great significance of outdoor activities should be publicized in the mess media as young people are easily swayed by network information now. 考试预测 1.小作文：重点关注静态图(表格，饼图)，并且复习流程图。 2.大作文：重点关注教育、环境、社会类话题。 3.重点浏览2017-2019年写作机经，雅思写作还会大量重复原题，可借助《高分范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。 (责任编辑：jasmine) |
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