GRE作文想要冲刺高分,考生在遣词造句上就绝对不能马虎。许多考生都存在用词重复,句式单一等问题,这也导致了大家作文成绩难以提升到4分以上的高分水准。 一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如: 原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. 改写:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语) 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如: 1) 原文:The team members are good players. 改写:The team members play well. 2) 原文:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness. 改写:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness. 3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如: 1) 原文:There is no opportunity for promotion. 改写:No opportunity for promotion exists. 2) 原文:Here are the books you ordered. 改写:The books you ordered have arrived. 二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了 例如: 1、原文:My supervisor went past my desk. 改写:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk. 2、原文:She is a careful shopper. 改写:She compares prices and quality. 三、尽量运用主动语态 例如: 1、原文:The organization has been supported by charity. 改写:Charity has supported the organization. 2、原文:The biscuits were stacked on a plate. 改写:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语 例如: 1、原文:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk. 改写:My little sister prefers chocolate milk. 2、原文:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations. 改写:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation. 3、原文:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire. 改写:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire. 4、原文:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores. 改写:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores. 五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语 例如: 1、原文:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form. 改写:They will not agree to any of his proposals. 2、原文:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall. 改写:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall. (责任编辑:admin) |
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